Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 先直接回答问题，并保持时态一致：谈论童年时用过去时，例如“I had a bike”。注意“didn't”后面接动词原形，应说“didn't use”。最后的“because she him is”意思不清楚，建议删掉或换成一个具体、完整的原因，例如说明你为什么很少骑车。

例: Yes, I did. I had a bike when I was a child, but I didn't ride it very often because I wasn't confident cycling. My parents usually took me to school instead.

提案: 回答时要围绕“bikes”展开，避免把“bikes”说成“bags”。可以先说明自行车在中国是否受欢迎，再用一两个具体细节支持观点，例如共享单车在城市中的使用情况及其便利、经济等优点。注意把想表达的词组成完整句子，避免不清楚或无法理解的表达。

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in China, especially shared bikes in big cities. People often use them for short trips because they are convenient and affordable. You can see them near subway stations and shopping areas.

× When I was a child, I have a bike.

✓ When I was a child, I had a bike.

句子描述的是“小时候”的经历，属于过去时间，因此应使用一般过去时。将 have 改为 had。

× I had a bike but I didn't used to ride the bike because she him is.

✓ I had a bike, but I didn't use to ride the bike.

在助动词 didn't 后，动词应使用原形，因此 used 应改为 use。“because she him is”语意不清，无法确定原意，所以不擅自补写；表达时请重新组织这一部分。