Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答直接，也给出了原因，但“my family was a little poor”表达不够自然，而且“bike”重复较多。可以说“my family didn’t have much money”，并用“so”自然连接原因和结果。

例: No, I didn’t. My family didn’t have much money when I was a child, so we couldn’t afford a bike.

提案: 先直接回答“是的，我认为很流行”，不必说“我完全同意”，因为考官是在询问你的看法。“the society”应改为“society”或“the country”；“in our”重复了，而且“pop pop bikes”含义不清。请确认你想表达的是“bicycles”还是“motorbikes”，并补充一个具体理由或例子。

例: Yes, I think bicycles are still very popular in my country, especially among children. They’re an affordable and convenient way for kids to get around, and many children enjoy riding them for fun.

× Although the society is developing fast, pop pop bikes are still the most popular vehicle in our in our country, especially for kids.

✓ Although society is developing fast, pop pop bikes are still the most popular vehicle in our in our country, especially for kids.

这里的 society 泛指整个社会，不需要定冠词 the。泛指一个整体概念时，通常直接使用名词，不加 the。

× Although the society is developing fast, pop pop bikes are still the most popular vehicle in our in our country, especially for kids.

✓ Although the society is developing fast, pop pop bikes are still the most popular vehicles in our in our country, especially for kids.

主语 bikes 是复数，后面表示它们所属类别的 vehicle 也应使用复数 vehicles。名词单复数应根据所指对象保持一致。