Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答直接，但后半部分意思不清楚，“it took my time to study”容易被理解为骑车占用了学习时间；“it's really a difficult time”也不够自然。建议说明你什么时候学会骑车，以及当时遇到的具体困难，并用连接词把经历串联起来。注意使用过去时，例如“was difficult”。

例: Yes, I had a bike as a child. I learned to ride it when I was about seven, but it was difficult at first because I kept losing my balance. After a few weeks of practice, I could ride around my neighborhood on my own.

提案: 你直接回答了问题，也提供了共享单车这一具体例子。不过，“hundreds of thousands”缺少明确依据，表达显得笼统；“write it”用词错误，应为“ride it”。建议说明人们骑车的原因，并用“for example”或“also”自然补充共享单车的使用方式。

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities. Many people ride them because they are affordable and convenient for short trips. Also, shared bikes are easy to find on the street; people can scan a QR code to unlock one and ride it to their destination.

× Of course I had a bike but when I was a child it took my time to study and learn to ride a bike it's really a difficult time.

✓ Of course, I had a bike, but when I was a child, it took my time to study and learn to ride a bike. It was really a difficult time.

这段话描述的是童年时期的经历，属于过去时间，因此后面的“it’s”应改为过去式“it was”，与前文的“had”和“was”保持时态一致。

× Of course I had a bike but when I was a child it took my time to study and learn to ride a bike it's really a difficult time.

✓ Of course, I had a bike, but when I was a child, it took my time to study and learn to ride a bike. It was really a difficult time.

原句在“bike”后直接接了另一个完整句子“it’s really a difficult time”，中间没有恰当的标点或连接词，造成句子粘连。应在此处使用句号，将两个完整句子分开。