Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Répondez directement, puis ajoutez un détail concret pour développer votre réponse. Pour parler d’un vélo en général, utilisez « a bike » plutôt que « the bike ». Il faut aussi dire « when I was a child » : l’article « a » est nécessaire devant « child ».

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was red, and I used to ride it around my neighbourhood after school.

提案: Commencez par une réponse claire, par exemple « I don’t think so », puis donnez une raison précise. « I juice » semble être une erreur pour « I think », et « too oftenly » n’est pas correct : dites « very often » ou « that often ». Utilisez aussi « they » pour parler des vélos, et non « it ». Enfin, reliez clairement le manque d’utilisation à votre opinion sur leur popularité.

例: I don’t think bikes are very popular in my country. Many people prefer to drive or take public transport, so you don’t see that many cyclists on the roads.

× Yes, I had the bike when I was child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

Use the indefinite article 'a' when referring to any bike, rather than a specific bike already known to the listener. The phrase 'when I was child' also needs an article before the singular countable noun 'child'.

× Yes, I had the bike when I was child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

A singular countable noun such as 'child' needs an article. Say 'a child.'

× No, and I juice that you don't use it too oftenly so it's not popular in my country.

✓ No, and I juice that you don't use it too often, so it's not popular in my country.

'Often' is already an adverb, so it does not take the '-ly' ending. Use 'too often.'