Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer responds directly, but “did possess” sounds overly formal and unnatural in casual conversation. Use “had” or “owned” instead. You could add one brief detail, such as when you rode it or where you used it, to make the answer more engaging.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I often rode it around my neighborhood after school.

提案: You give a clear opinion and a relevant contrast. “Cyclers” is less natural here; say “cyclists” or “people who cycle.” Be more specific about the problems caused by the lack of bike lanes, and use a linking phrase such as “however” to connect your ideas smoothly.

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. However, my city has very few bike lanes, so cyclists often have to share busy roads with cars, which can be unsafe.