Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 先直接回答问题，并注意讲过去的经历时使用过去时：用“didn't have”而不是“don't have”。“buy”应为“bike”；表达学骑车时说“learn/practice how to ride a bike”，不要说“use the bike”。可以补充一个具体细节，例如在哪里练习或是否学会。删去无法辨认的结尾内容。

例: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. However, I did try to learn how to ride one. I practised in a nearby park, but I never became very confident.

提案: 先明确回答自行车是否受欢迎，再用一到两句解释原因。注意区分“bikes”（自行车）和“shared bikes”（共享单车）；“可以被借用”可表达为“can be rented/borrowed”。避免重复“街上有很多自行车”，并使用连接词（如“because”或“for example”）让理由更清楚。

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in big cities. Many people use shared bikes because they are convenient for short trips. You can often see them near subway stations and shopping areas.

× No I don't have a buy when I was a child, but I have tried to practice how to use the bike.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child, but I practiced how to use one.

句子描述的是“小时候”的情况，属于过去时间，因此应使用一般过去时：将 “don't have” 改为 “didn't have”，将 “have tried” 改为 “practiced”。“bike”是自行车；这里的 “buy” 不符合句意。

× Of course there are always many biased on the street can be be borrowed by people so there are lots of buys on the streets.

✓ Of course, there are always many bikes on the street that can be borrowed by people, so there are lots of bikes on the streets.

“there are many bikes on the street”已经构成完整的主句，后面的“can be borrowed by people”需要通过关系词“that”连接，用来修饰“bikes”。另外，原句中的“biased”和“buys”应为“bikes”，结合上下文指自行车。

× Of course there are always many biased on the street can be be borrowed by people so there are lots of buys on the streets.

✓ Of course, there are always many bikes on the street that can be borrowed by people, so there are lots of bikes on the streets.

情态动词“can”后应接动词原形；被动语态的结构是“can be + 过去分词”，所以应为“can be borrowed”。原句多写了一个“be”。