Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answer directly and keep the tense consistent: use “didn’t have” for the past. Since “bike” and “bicycle” usually mean the same thing, avoid saying you did not have one and then saying you did. Add a clear detail about when or where you rode it, and separate your ideas with a linking word. Check punctuation and aim for a natural phrase such as “favorite pastime.”

例: Yes, I had a bicycle when I was a child. I used to ride it with my brother almost every day, usually around our neighborhood. It was one of my favorite pastimes.

提案: Give a direct answer, then support it with a specific example. Avoid repeating “in our country” and “that bike.” Use “the Bullet” or “Bullet bikes,” and make the verb agree with the subject: “it deserves.” Clarify whether you mean motorcycles, since the example appears to refer to a motorcycle.

例: Yes, motorcycles are very popular in my country. The Royal Enfield Bullet is especially well known because of its distinctive design and powerful sound. I like it too, so I think it deserves its popularity.

× No I don't have a bike when I was a child but I have a bicycle and I used to ride it daily with my brother it was my favourite pastime activity

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child, but I had a bicycle and used to ride it daily with my brother. It was my favourite pastime activity.

The answer refers to childhood, so the verbs describing what the student had should be in the past tense: didn't have and had. Used to ride and was are also correctly in the past. Keep the verb tense consistent when describing past experiences.

× No I don't have a bike when I was a child but I have a bicycle and I used to ride it daily with my brother it was my favourite pastime activity

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child, but I had a bicycle and used to ride it daily with my brother. It was my favourite pastime activity.

The original is a run-on sentence: it joins several complete thoughts without suitable punctuation. Add a comma before but and end the sentence after brother. Start the next complete thought with a capital letter.

× Yes, I think bikes are pretty popular in our country like the most popular bike in our country is Bullet and I love that bike that bike deserve the hype.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are pretty popular in our country. The most popular bike in our country is the Bullet, and I love that bike. That bike deserves the hype.

That bike is a singular subject, so the verb must be deserves, not deserve. In the present simple, add -s to the verb when its subject is third-person singular.

× Yes, I think bikes are pretty popular in our country like the most popular bike in our country is Bullet and I love that bike that bike deserve the hype.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are pretty popular in our country. The most popular bike in our country is the Bullet, and I love that bike. That bike deserves the hype.

The original joins multiple complete ideas without clear punctuation, creating a run-on sentence. Separate the ideas with periods and use a comma before and when joining the two clauses about the most popular bike and the speaker's opinion.