Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answer directly using the past tense. Say “I didn’t have a bike” rather than “I do not have,” and avoid the unclear phrase “have back.” You can add one brief, relevant reason or detail.

例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My family lived near school, so I usually walked there.

提案: Start with a clear answer and use “bikes,” not “bags.” Correct the plural and cost expressions: say “many people can access them” and “they aren’t very expensive.” Avoid repeating the same idea, and finish your final sentence with a complete point. Add one specific reason or example.

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities. They’re relatively affordable and convenient for short journeys, so many people use them to commute or run errands.

× No, I do not have back when I was a child.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

The question asks about the past, indicated by when I was a child, so use the past form didn't have rather than do not have. Include a bike to make clear what you did not have.

× Yes, I think bags are popular in my country because many peoples can easily access bikes and it is not as much as a huge cash is not given for getting a bike.

✓ Yes, I think bags are popular in my country because many people can easily access bikes, and buying a bike does not cost a huge amount of money.

People is already the plural form of person, so it should not take the plural ending -s. Use many people, not many peoples. The rest of the sentence is rephrased to express the apparent meaning clearly.

× Yes, I think bags are popular in my country because many peoples can easily access bikes and it is not as much as a huge cash is not given for getting a bike.

✓ Yes, I think bags are popular in my country because many people can easily access bikes, and buying a bike does not cost a huge amount of cash.

Cash is uncountable, so it does not take the article a directly. Use a quantity expression such as a huge amount of cash.

× Yes, I think bags are popular in my country because many peoples can easily access bikes and it is not as much as a huge cash is not given for getting a bike.

✓ Yes, I think bags are popular in my country because many people can easily access bikes, and buying a bike does not cost a huge amount of money.

The original clause it is not as much as a huge cash is not given combines an unclear comparison with an incomplete passive construction. Use a clear subject and verb: buying a bike does not cost a huge amount of money.

× So today I think most of the.

✓ So today, I think most people in my country ride bikes.

Most of the must be followed by a noun, and the sentence is incomplete as written. Finish the thought with a noun and a complete clause. The correction gives one possible completion based on the surrounding context.