Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Geçmişteki çocukluk deneyiminizden söz ettiğiniz için “haven’t” yerine “didn’t have” kullanın. “I was screened a bike” ifadesi anlaşılır değil; bisiklet alamadığınızı kastediyorsanız “my parents couldn’t afford one” gibi açık bir neden belirtin. Önce doğrudan cevap verin, ardından kısa ve doğal bir açıklama ekleyin.

例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because my parents couldn’t afford one. I usually walked to school instead.

提案: Soruyu ülkenizde bisikletlerin ne kadar popüler olduğu açısından doğrudan yanıtlayın. “I think no” yerine “I don’t think so” veya “I don’t think they’re very popular” kullanın. Tekrarları çıkarın; “we have not a bike” yerine “there aren’t many bikes” deyin. Son bölüm anlaşılmadığı için nedeninizi açıkça ifade edin; örneğin bisiklet yollarının azlığından söz edebilirsiniz.

例: I don’t think bikes are very popular in my country. There aren’t many dedicated bike lanes, so most people prefer to travel by car or public transport.

× No, I haven't a bike when I was a child because I was screened a bike.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

The question asks about a completed period in the past, indicated by 'when I was a child', so use the past form 'didn't have' rather than the present perfect form 'haven't'. The phrase 'I was screened a bike' is unclear, so it has been left out rather than guessed at.

× I think no because we We have not We have not a bike in my country because we don't have a y'all.

✓ I don't think bikes are popular in my country because we don't have bikes.

For a present-tense negative with 'have' as the main verb, use 'do not' or 'don't': 'we don't have'. The repeated words are disfluencies, and the ending 'a y'all' is unclear, so it has not been included.

× I think no because we We have not We have not a bike in my country because we don't have a y'all.

✓ I don't think bikes are popular in my country because we don't have bikes.

The sentence refers to bikes in general, so use the plural count noun 'bikes' rather than the singular 'a bike'. Use plural nouns when making a general statement about something.