Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your response does not answer the examiner’s question. Answer directly by saying whether you had a bike, then add a brief detail such as when you got it or how you used it.

例: Yes, I did. My parents bought me a small blue bike when I was about seven, and I used to ride it around our neighborhood with my friends.

提案: Your answer is relevant and clear, but it is too brief to develop your idea. Add a reason or a specific example, and use a linking phrase such as “because” or “for example.”

例: Yes, I do, especially in smaller cities. Bikes are an affordable and convenient way to get around, and many people use them for short commutes or exercise.