Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answer directly, then add one clear supporting detail. Use “when I was a child” and check the unclear phrase “one falser bike”—name the type of bike you mean. Avoid the filler “Yeah” at the end; instead, explain briefly why you are happy with your bike.

例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. However, I have a folding bike now, and I’m very happy with it because it’s convenient for getting around.

提案: State your opinion clearly and support it with a specific reason or example. Use “young people in my country,” not “your youngsters,” and say “bikes are popular” or “a bike is a good way.” The middle of your answer is difficult to follow, so avoid repeating your conclusion and replace “enhance your overall outlook” with a relevant benefit, such as improving fitness or reducing travel costs.

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among young people. They’re an affordable way to travel short distances, and cycling also helps people stay fit. In crowded cities, bikes can be more convenient than cars.

× No, I didn't have any kind of bike when I was child, but currently I have one falser bike.

✓ No, I didn't have any kind of bike when I was a child, but currently I have one falser bike.

The singular countable noun child needs an article. Use a before child in this expression: when I was a child.

× Most of your youngsters have their own bike because they're riding A bike is a best way to enhance your overall outlook and also it is the best way to travel anywhere.

✓ Most of our youngsters have their own bike because they're riding A bike is a best way to enhance your overall outlook and also it is the best way to travel anywhere.

The speaker is talking about people in their own country, so our is the appropriate possessive determiner. Your refers to the examiner's country or group.

× Most of your youngsters have their own bike because they're riding A bike is a best way to enhance your overall outlook and also it is the best way to travel anywhere.

✓ Most of our youngsters have their own bike because riding a bike is a good way to enhance your overall outlook and is also the best way to travel anywhere.

The original joins because they're riding directly to A bike is, creating an incomplete and confusing structure. Make riding a bike the subject of the because-clause, and connect the two descriptions of the bike with parallel wording.

× A bike is a best way to enhance your overall outlook.

✓ A bike is the best way to enhance your overall outlook.

Best is a superlative adjective. Use the before a superlative when describing something as the top choice.

× Yeah, I think bike is very popular in my country.

✓ Yeah, I think bikes are very popular in my country.

When referring to bicycles in general, use the plural noun bikes and the plural verb are. Alternatively, you could say the bicycle is very popular.