Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 目前回答难以理解，也没有清楚回答“小时候是否有自行车”。先用“Yes, I did”或“No, I didn’t”直接作答，再补充一至两个具体细节，例如自行车的颜色、骑车的地点或频率。注意使用完整句子和正确的过去时，如“I rode”或“I had”。

例: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bike when I was a child, and I often rode it around my neighborhood with my friends.

提案: 你有直接表达肯定，但后面的句子语法不自然，且“very more and more bikes”表达有误。可以说明在公园看到很多人骑车，并补充一个原因或具体场景。使用连接词（如“because”或“for example”）让回答更连贯；描述数量增加时可说“more and more people are riding bikes”。

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. For example, when I visit a park, I often see many people cycling, especially at weekends. They enjoy it because it is a convenient way to exercise.

× Is I have I practiced by Mike, uh, East Coast me uh, much time when I, umm, when I, uh, children.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

问题问的是小时候的经历，因此回答应使用过去时。表达过去拥有某物时，应说“I had”，而不是“I have”。原句中有较多无法辨认的语音内容，因此这里只修改可以确定的时态错误。

× Is I have I practiced by Mike, uh, East Coast me uh, much time when I, umm, when I, uh, children.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

“when I ... children”这一部分缺少谓语动词，不能构成完整的从句。表示“当我还是个孩子时”应说“when I was a child”；“I”后需要使用系动词“was”。

× Oh yes, of course. Umm, I when I go to a park I look very, uh, very more and more bikes.

✓ Oh yes, of course. When I go to a park, I see more and more bikes.

“more and more”表示“越来越多”，已经包含递增比较的意思，前面不能再加“very”。此外，句中“I when I go...”有重复和中断；整理后可说“When I go to a park, I see more and more bikes.”