Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answer directly, then describe the bike clearly. Avoid repeating the filler word “like,” and replace the unclear phrase “pink rainbows” with a natural description. Add one specific detail, such as where you rode it or how you felt about it.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was about nine. It was bright pink with a rainbow pattern, so it was easy to recognize. I used to ride it around my neighborhood after school.

提案: State clearly that bikes are popular, then support your answer with specific examples. “Transporting foods, deliveries and Locations” is unclear; explain who uses bikes and what they use them for. Use linking words such as “for example” or “because,” and avoid the unnecessary tag “you know?”

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in busy cities. For example, delivery workers often use them to bring food and parcels to customers. They’re convenient because they’re affordable and can get through traffic easily.

× Bikes in my country are essential for transporting foods, deliveries and Locations, you know?

✓ Bikes in my country are essential for transporting food and deliveries, you know?

Food is usually an uncountable noun when it refers to food in general, so it does not normally take a plural -s. Use foods when referring to distinct kinds of food. Also, transporting locations is not grammatically appropriate in this context, so it has been omitted.