Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 先直接回答，再补充一条具体信息。句子中“got for me”缺少宾语，可说“got one for me”或“bought me a bike”。可以说明当时骑车的地点或感受，让回答更完整、自然。

例: Yes, I did. My grandmother bought me a bike when I was about eight, and I used to ride it around our neighborhood.

提案: 你已经给出了观点和理由，但“in the weekend”应改为“on weekends”，并在两个意思之间加上连接词。“we see their friends”指代不清，可以明确说人们骑车去见朋友，或补充骑车受欢迎的其他原因，例如方便、环保。

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people ride them on weekends to visit friends, and cycling is also a convenient way to get around.

× Yes, my grandmother got for me.

✓ Yes, my grandmother got one for me.

动词 got 后面缺少宾语，句子结构不完整。这里可用 one 指代前文提到的 bike。建议检查动词是否需要宾语，并在句中补全。

× Yes, I think so because many people ride bikes in the weekend we see their friends.

✓ Yes, I think so because many people ride bikes on weekends to see their friends.

表示“在周末”时，通常用 on weekends 或 on the weekend，不用 in the weekend。建议记住固定搭配 on weekends。

× Yes, I think so because many people ride bikes in the weekend we see their friends.

✓ Yes, I think so because many people ride bikes on weekends to see their friends.

原句中的 we see their friends 与前面的 many people ride bikes 直接连接，缺少合适的连接方式，而且主语突然从 many people 变成 we。若想表达骑车的目的，可用 to see their friends，表示“为了见朋友”。