Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 先直接回答问题，并保持过去时态一致：把“have”改为“had”。“at the elementary school”应改为“in elementary school”。答案中“ride a bike”重复较多，可以用代词或简洁表达替换；也可以补充一个具体细节，例如学骑车的地点或当时的感受。

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My grandmother taught me to ride it in elementary school, and I remember practising with her in a nearby park.

提案: 回答切题，也提供了观察到的例子，但句子较长，缺少标点，且“my people”用法不正确，应改为“many people”。“You can see many people ride”可改为“You can see many people riding”。请确认公园名称；如果想表达河边的公园，可以说“a riverside park”。最后可简要说明骑车受欢迎的原因，让内容更具体。

例: Yes, cycling is quite popular in Taiwan. I often see people riding along the riverside park, especially at weekends when I go there to play basketball. I think many people enjoy it because it is a convenient way to exercise.

× Yes, I have a bike when I was a child and I learned how to ride a bike with my grandparents.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child and I learned how to ride a bike with my grandparents.

句子描述的是“小时候”的经历，时间明确发生在过去，因此表示“拥有”也应使用过去式 had，而不是现在式 have。谈论过去的经历时，要确保相关动词的时态与过去时间一致。