Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答基本切题，但要使用过去时描述童年经历：将“have”改为“had”，并用“when I was a child”，不能用“will”。可以补充一项具体细节，例如自行车的颜色或你骑车的地点。

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was red, and I often rode it around my neighbourhood.

提案: 你介绍了自己的自行车，但没有回答自行车在你所在国家是否流行。先直接表达观点，再用具体原因或例子支持，例如人们骑车通勤、锻炼或短途出行。注意“very like”应改为“really like”，并避免重复或混乱的表达。

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people ride them to work or school because they are affordable and convenient, especially for short journeys.

× Yes, I have a bike when I will a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

句子描述的是童年时的经历，应使用过去时。have 应改为过去式 had；表示“是一个孩子”需要 be 动词，且过去式应为 was，不能说 “will a child”。建议先判断事件发生的时间，再统一使用相应时态。

× I think my bike is popular my in my country.

✓ I think my bike is popular in my country.

“popular”后面应接介词短语 “in my country”，其中多余的 my 破坏了句子结构。建议按照“主语 + be 动词 + 形容词 + 介词短语”的顺序组织句子。

× It's green and it has four wheels and I very like it.

✓ It's green and it has four wheels, and I really like it.

very 通常不能直接修饰动词 like，因此 “I very like it” 不正确。表达“我很喜欢它”时，可以用 really 修饰 like，说 “I really like it”。