Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 先直接回答“有”，然后用一到两句描述自行车或说明你小时候如何使用它。“I I am tired”与问题无关，也有重复；“The bike already is so much”表达不清，应删掉或换成具体信息，例如自行车的外观、用途或你对它的感受。注意使用过去时，因为问题问的是童年经历。

例: Yes, I did. I had a blue-green bike when I was a child, and I thought it looked beautiful. I often rode it around my neighborhood.

提案: 避免只说“I don't know”，尽量给出明确观点，例如“我认为很流行”或“我认为不太流行”，再补充一个原因或观察到的例子。“near my home basket road”和“I don't know how about any people”意思不清；可以说明你所在地区人们是否常骑车，或用“I'm not sure about the whole country, but...”限定回答。

例: I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in smaller cities. For example, I often see people riding them to work or to nearby shops. However, their popularity may vary from place to place.

× I have a blue-green bike.

✓ I had a blue-green bike.

这里是在回答小时候是否有自行车，描述的是过去的情况，因此应使用 have 的过去式 had。回答关于过去经历的问题时，注意将相关动词改为过去式。

× The bike is very beautiful.

✓ The bike was very beautiful.

这句话是在描述小时候那辆自行车，语境指向过去，因此应将 is 改为过去式 was。描述过去的人或事物时，be 动词通常使用 was 或 were。

× I don't know how about any people?

✓ I don't know about other people.

how about 不能这样接在 I don't know 后面组成间接疑问句，而且 any people 在这里也不自然。若想表达“我不知道其他人的情况”，可以说 I don't know about other people。注意区分直接提问和间接表达。