Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answer directly, then add one specific detail about when or where you rode your bike. Correct “write” to “ride” and say “I became good at riding it” (or “I became a good rider”). Keep the answer natural and concise.

例: Yes, I did. My father taught me how to ride a bike when I was about six. It was difficult at first, but after a few days of practice, I could ride around our neighborhood by myself.

提案: Give a direct answer and support it with a clear reason or example. Correct “mute” to “commute,” use “bicycles” or “a bicycle,” and change “convenience” to the adjective “convenient.” Add a linking phrase such as “because” or “for example.”

例: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in Korea, especially in cities with bike lanes. Many people use them to commute to work or school because they are affordable and convenient. They can also help people avoid traffic and get some exercise.

× I became a good at writing it.

✓ I became good at writing it.

Do not use the article 'a' before 'good' here. 'Good' is an adjective describing the speaker, so say 'I became good at...'.

× They use bicycle because it's not expensive and it's really convenience.

✓ They use a bicycle because it's not expensive and it's really convenience.

A singular countable noun such as 'bicycle' needs an article. Use 'a bicycle' when referring to one bicycle in general.

× They use bicycle because it's not expensive and it's really convenience.

✓ They use bicycle because it's not expensive and it's really convenient.

'Convenience' is a noun, but this sentence needs an adjective after 'is'. Use 'convenient' to describe the bicycle.