Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 先直接回答问题，再补充一两个具体细节。你提到小时候有自己的自行车，但“I have my own back”表达不清楚；如果想说“我有自己的自行车”，应说“I had my own bike”。由于问题询问过去的经历，注意使用过去时，如“had”和“rode”。可以补充自行车的颜色、用途或骑车的感受，并避免用“umm”填充停顿。

例: Yes, I had my own bike when I was a child. It was blue, and I often rode it around my neighborhood after school. I really enjoyed the freedom it gave me.

提案: 开头应明确回答自行车是否受欢迎；注意这里应说“bikes”，而不是“bags”。你给出了原因，但“it's very convenient”中的“it”指代不清，而且重复了“it's”。可以说明自行车对谁方便、在哪些场景方便，并加入一个具体例子，使回答更有说服力。

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because they’re convenient for short trips. For example, many people ride them to nearby shops or to work, especially when traffic is heavy.

× I have my own back and I like it very much.

✓ I had my own back and liked it very much.

这句话描述的是童年时期的情况，前文也用了过去时“was”，所以“have”和“like”应改为过去式“had”和“liked”。建议叙述过去经历时，保持句子中的动词时态一致。