Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answer directly and use the past tense consistently: say “I had” rather than “I do have.” You could add one specific detail, such as how often you rode it or where you used it.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used to ride it around my neighborhood after school.

提案: Use the plural “bikes” when speaking generally, and separate your ideas with linking words to avoid a run-on sentence. Replace “a really big space like a wide road for the bike” with a clearer description, and keep the time reference consistent when describing your childhood.

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. Many towns have wide roads and cycle lanes, so cycling is convenient. When I was a child, I often rode my bike to school.

× Yes, I do have a bike when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The question asks about a past time, and the phrase when I was a child confirms that the answer should use the past tense. Use had instead of do have.

× Yeah, I think bike is quite popular in our country we have a really big space like a wide road for the bike and we're used to ride a bike to school when I was a child.

✓ Yeah, I think bikes are quite popular in our country. We have a lot of wide roads for bikes, and we used to ride bikes to school when I was a child.

When referring to bicycles as a general category, use the plural noun bikes rather than the singular bike. The verb should also agree with the plural subject: bikes are. Use bikes in the later references as well, since the speaker is describing bicycles generally.

× Yeah, I think bike is quite popular in our country we have a really big space like a wide road for the bike and we're used to ride a bike to school when I was a child.

✓ Yeah, I think bikes are quite popular in our country. We have a lot of wide roads for bikes, and we used to ride bikes to school when I was a child.

The speaker describes a childhood habit, so use used to ride to express a repeated action in the past. We're used to ride is not the correct form for this meaning. We're used to riding would mean that we are accustomed to riding now.

× Yeah, I think bike is quite popular in our country we have a really big space like a wide road for the bike and we're used to ride a bike to school when I was a child.

✓ Yeah, I think bikes are quite popular in our country. We have a lot of wide roads for bikes, and we used to ride bikes to school when I was a child.

The original answer joins several complete ideas without appropriate punctuation, making it a run-on sentence. Separate the main ideas with a period, and use a comma before and to join the remaining clauses clearly.