Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 先直接回答过去的情况，注意使用过去时：将 “Yes, I do” 改为 “Yes, I did”，并将 “ride” 改为 “rode”。“we enjoyed riding it” 中的 it 指代不够清楚，可以说明是你和家人一起骑车。补充的周末活动是具体的细节，但注意句子不要过长。

例: Yes, I did. My father bought me a bike when I was six, and I loved riding it with my family. We often rode to different parks at weekends and had picnics there.

提案: 回答直接，但可以把 “public bikes” 说得更自然一些，例如 “bike-sharing services” 或 “shared bikes”。避免用 “like” 连接完整解释，也尽量避免口语中偏随意的 “gonna”；可用 “because” 说明共享单车受欢迎的原因，并补充一个具体好处。

例: Yes, absolutely. Bike-sharing services are very popular in my country because shared bikes are easy to find in many places. They’re also an affordable and convenient way to travel short distances.

× Yes I do.

✓ Yes, I did.

问题问的是你小时候是否有自行车，指的是过去的情况，因此回答也应使用一般过去时。将现在时 do 改为过去时 did。

× Every weekend we ride it to different parks and have a picnic there.

✓ Every weekend we rode it to different parks and had a picnic there.

这句话描述的是小时候每个周末的习惯，属于过去的经历，因此 ride 和 have 都应使用过去式 rode 和 had。

× We have different kinds of public bikes, like people can use them almost everywhere and that's not gonna be expensive.

✓ We have different kinds of public bikes. For example, people can use them almost everywhere, and using them isn't expensive.

原句用 like 引出一个完整句子，句子结构不够清晰。可以用 For example 引出例子，并将前面的内容分成独立句子；另外，用 using them 明确指出“不贵”的是使用公共自行车这件事。