Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你直接回答了问题，也尝试补充骑车的好处，但后半部分没有说完，影响表达完整性。“my parents always ride”应使用过去时“my parents often rode”；“have fun limits”表达不清楚，可改为“had a lot of fun”。本题重点是童年是否有自行车，可以补充一个具体回忆，例如和谁一起骑、在哪里骑。建议控制在两三句，并避免加入与问题联系不够紧密的健康益处。

例: Yes, I did. My parents bought me a small bike when I was about seven, and they often rode alongside me in the park. I really enjoyed learning to ride it with them.

提案: 你清楚表达了自行车很受欢迎，也提供了理由，但结尾重复了开头的观点。注意使用复数“bikes”；“have a trip”可改为“get around”或“travel short distances”，“economic friendly”应改为“economical”，“recyclable”不适合描述骑车本身，可说“environmentally friendly”。建议补充一个具体原因或例子，并用连接词自然串联，避免重复。

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities. They’re an affordable and environmentally friendly way to get around, and they’re particularly useful for short trips. Many people also ride them for exercise or leisure.

× Definitely yes, when I was a child, my parents always ride a bike with me and we usually have fun limits.

✓ Definitely, yes. When I was a child, my parents always rode a bike with me, and we usually had fun limits.

这句话描述的是童年时期发生的事情，应用一般过去时。因此，ride 应改为 rode，have 应改为 had。

× It's not only benefit for your physical health but also enhance your body and promote your mental health.

✓ Not only is it beneficial for your physical health, but it also enhances your body and promotes your mental health.

benefit 在这里需要表达“有益的”，应使用形容词 beneficial。改写后，beneficial 与后面的 enhances、promotes 也能更清楚地表达两方面的益处。

× It's not only benefit for your physical health but also enhance your body and promote your mental health.

✓ Not only is it beneficial for your physical health, but it also enhances your body and promotes your mental health.

主语 it 是第三人称单数，因此一般现在时的谓语动词要加 -s：enhance 应改为 enhances，promote 应改为 promotes。

× There is no doubt that bike is popular in our country.

✓ There is no doubt that bikes are popular in our country.

这里泛指自行车这一类交通工具，应使用复数 bikes，而不是单数 bike。相应地，谓语动词也应使用 are。

× It is recyclable and economic friendly.

✓ It is recyclable and environmentally friendly.

economic 的意思是“经济的”，不能直接与 friendly 搭配来表达“环保的”。表达“环保”通常使用 environmentally friendly。