Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answer directly using the past tense, since the question asks about your childhood. The phrases “use a pack” and “read through package” are unclear, so use simple, relevant wording. Add one specific detail, such as where you rode your bike or what you did with it.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I often rode it around my neighborhood after school, and sometimes I raced my friends in the park.

提案: Give a clear answer first, then explain who uses bikes and why. The opening phrase is difficult to understand, and “commute in short distance” should be “travel short distances” or “commute short distances.” Use a linking word such as “while” to compare different reasons for cycling.

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people use them to travel short distances or commute to work, while others ride them for exercise and recreation.

× Yes, I have to use a pack and sometimes I read through package and sometimes I I do competition with friends when I am off.

✓ Yes, I had to use a pack, and sometimes I read through a package, and sometimes I did competitions with friends when I was off.

The question asks about the student's childhood, so the answer should use past-time forms. Change have to use to had to use, do to did, and am to was. Read has the same spelling in the present and past, but it is pronounced differently in the past.

× Yes, I have to use a pack and sometimes I read through package and sometimes I I do competition with friends when I am off.

✓ Yes, I have to use a pack and sometimes I read through a package and sometimes I I do competition with friends when I am off.

Package is a singular countable noun, so it needs an article. Use a package.

× Others they commute in short distance while others ride us accessing.

✓ Others commute in short distance while others ride us accessing.

Others already functions as the subject, so the additional subject pronoun they is redundant. The phrase ride us accessing is unclear, so it cannot be reliably corrected without more context.

× Others they commute in short distance while others ride us accessing.

✓ Others they commute short distances while others ride us accessing.

The phrase refers to short trips in general, so the plural form distances is appropriate. The phrase ride us accessing is unclear, so it cannot be reliably corrected without more context.