Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答切题，但时态不一致：谈童年经历时，建议将“love”改为过去式“loved”。“It was so big for me”表达不够清楚，可以说明自行车对你来说太大、骑起来不方便。可以补充一个具体细节，例如是谁买的，或你骑车时遇到什么困难；注意最多用几句话，避免重复。

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, and I loved it. It was a little too big for me, so I sometimes found it difficult to ride.

提案: 需要直接回答现在自行车是否受欢迎，而不只是比较过去和现在。“it was popular”中的指代不清，建议明确说“bikes were popular”；“as time goes by”后面应使用现在时态来描述现状。最后一句表达不完整，也把自行车说成玩具，容易偏题。可以说明人们转而使用什么交通方式，并给出具体原因，例如电动车更方便。

例: Bikes used to be very popular in my country, especially when I was a child. These days, fewer people use them for commuting because electric scooters are often faster and more convenient.

× Yes, I did have a bike and I love it, but it's so big for me.

✓ Yes, I did have a bike, and I loved it, but it was so big for me.

这句话描述的是小时候的经历，因此主要时态应使用一般过去时。应将“love”改为“loved”，将“it's”改为“it was”。“did have”本身正确：助动词“did”后使用动词原形“have”。

× Umm, it appears another new toy like.

✓ Um, it seems like another new toy.

“appear”后不能直接按原句的顺序连接“another new toy like”。可使用“It seems like + 名词短语”表达“它看起来像……”，并把“like”放在名词短语之前。