Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 先直接回答是否有自行车，再补充具体经历。注意时态：谈童年喜好用过去时“liked”；“ride bike”应为“ride a bike”。“my dad gave me a bag at the gate”与问题关联不清，可能是用词错误；请明确父亲送给你的是自行车还是其他物品。最后一句没有说完，应补充完整地点或活动。

例: Yes, I did. I loved riding bikes when I was a child, and my dad gave me my first bike when I was six. I often rode it around my neighbourhood after school.

提案: 直接回答“是的”即可，不需要用较生硬的“the answer is absolutely yes”。“encourages people to”后面缺少动词，而且“Green”没有形成完整意思。请说明人们被鼓励做什么，并用具体原因或例子展开，例如环保、骑行基础设施或共享单车。

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people ride them for short journeys because cycling is affordable and environmentally friendly. In some cities, bike-sharing services also make cycling more convenient.

× Absolutely, because I like riding bikes in my childhood and my dad gave me a bag at the gate when I was six years old.

✓ Absolutely, because I liked riding bikes in my childhood and my dad gave me a bag at the gate when I was six years old.

这里是在描述童年时期的情况，时间背景是过去，因此应将一般现在时“like”改为一般过去时“liked”。

× I often ride bike in.

✓ I often rode bikes then.

这句话承接前文，描述的是童年时期经常做的事，应将“ride”改为过去式“rode”。原句末尾的“in”没有接上后续内容，改为“then”可表达“那时”。

× I often ride bike in.

✓ I often rode bikes then.

“bike”在这里表示经常骑的自行车，泛指时应使用复数“bikes”。也可以说“rode a bike”，但若表示经常骑自行车这一活动，用“rode bikes”更自然。

× In my opinion, the answer is absolutely yes, because our country encourages people to. Green.

✓ In my opinion, the answer is absolutely yes, because our country encourages people to go green.

“encourages people to”后面缺少动词原形；“Green”单独成句也不是完整句子。可将两部分连起来说“encourages people to go green”，其中“to”后接动词“go”。