Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你直接回答了问题，也提供了购买年龄和颜色等细节，但需要注意过去时：讲童年经历时用“had”“bought”和“liked”；“when I was child”应改为“when I was a child”，“It made me so happy about that”表达不自然。可以补充一个具体回忆，让回答更生动。

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My parents bought it for me when I was seven, and it was bright blue. I was thrilled when I got it, and I often rode it around our neighbourhood after school.

提案: 回答虽然切题，但只有一个词，没有解释原因或提供具体细节。建议先明确表达观点，再说明人们骑自行车的原因，并举出常见用途或场景。

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people use them for short trips because they are affordable and convenient. You can often see people cycling to work or riding along riverside paths at weekends.

× Yes, I have a bike when I was child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

问题询问的是你小时候的情况，且句中有过去时间从句“when I was...”，所以主句也应使用过去时。将“have”改为“had”。

× Yes, I have a bike when I was child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

“child”是可数名词单数，前面需要冠词。这里应说“a child”，不能省略冠词。

× I like it very much.

✓ I liked it very much.

这里说的是小时候喜欢那辆自行车，属于过去的情况，因此应将现在时“like”改为过去时“liked”。