Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 先直接回答“有”或“没有”，再补充一个具体细节。原句“As I did”表达不自然，建议用“Yes, I did”开头；“riding”最好说明是骑自行车。

例: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bike when I was about six, and I often rode it around my neighbourhood with my friends.

提案: 回答时注意主谓一致：bikes是复数，应使用“They are”。“welcomed”和“addicted to it”在这里不自然，可改为“popular”或“widely used”。删去重复和不完整的句子，并用一个具体理由或例子展开；注意“骑行”是“cycling”，不是“writing”。

例: Yes, bikes are very popular in China, especially in large cities. Many people use shared bikes to travel short distances because they are convenient and affordable. I also enjoy cycling in my free time.

× There are lot of people

✓ There are a lot of people

“People”是可数名词复数。表示“许多”时，可以说“a lot of people”或“lots of people”；不能直接说“lot of people”。

× There are lots of people addicted to it.

✓ There are lots of people addicted to them.

这里的“it”指前文的“bikes”，而“bikes”是复数名词，因此应使用复数代词“them”。