Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 先直接回答过去是否有自行车，并使用过去时（如 *I didn’t have one*）。随后用一两个具体细节解释原因，例如担心交通安全，以及你当时选择的出行方式。注意 *bike* 前的冠词或代词，并避免把多个想法挤在一个句子里。

例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. I thought cycling on busy roads was dangerous, so I usually walked or got a ride from my parents.

提案: 开头直接表明自行车是否受欢迎；不要用不自然的 *Absolutely out of country*，可以说 *Yes, they’re quite popular in my country*。说明受欢迎的原因，并补充一个具体场景或例子。注意 *bikes* 的复数形式、*go everywhere* 的表达；回答目前在句中途结束，需补完意思，并控制在五句以内。

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities. They’re an affordable and convenient way to travel short distances, and people can often avoid traffic jams. For example, many people ride bikes to nearby shops or train stations.

× No I don't have because I think my bike is a dangerous thing so I don't like bike I just use the other way

✓ No, I didn't have one because I think bikes are dangerous, so I don't like bikes. I just use other ways of getting around.

问题问的是小时候的情况，因此表示“没有自行车”应使用过去时 didn't have，而不是现在时 don't have。回答过去经历时，注意根据问题的时间调整动词时态。

× I don't like bike

✓ I don't like bikes.

这里泛指自行车这种交通工具，通常用复数 bikes。泛指一类可数名词时，常用复数形式；也可以说 I don't like riding a bike。

× Bike is an easy and simple way to go to everywhere you want to go near your space

✓ Bikes are an easy and simple way to go everywhere you want to go near your home.

这里泛指自行车，应使用复数主语 Bikes，并与之搭配使用 are。泛指一类事物时，可以使用复数名词。

× to go to everywhere

✓ to go everywhere

everywhere 本身已表示“到处、任何地方”，前面不需要再加介词 to。应直接说 go everywhere。