Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answer directly, then describe the bike using natural phrasing. “A red color bike” is awkward; say “a red bike.” You could also add one specific detail about how you used it.

例: Yes, I had a red bike when I was a child. It had sporty rims, and I used to ride it around my neighborhood after school.

提案: Make your comparison clearer and use “many” rather than “much” with countable nouns like “bikes.” Specify whether you mean bicycles or motorbikes, and briefly explain the difference you have noticed.

例: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in Sri Lanka, especially for short trips. I’m living in Malaysia now, though, and I don’t see as many people cycling here.

× Yes, I did own a bike when I was a child and it was a red color bike with sport rims.

✓ Yes, I did own a bike when I was a child, and it was a red bike with sport rims.

In this context, red color bike is not a natural adjective phrase. Use red directly to describe the bike; color is unnecessary. You could also say a red-colored bike.

× Yeah, very much. In Sri Lanka they are very popular, but I'm in Malaysia now and I don't see any bikes that much.

✓ Yeah, very much. In Sri Lanka they are very popular, but I'm in Malaysia now and I don't see many bikes.

Bikes is a plural count noun, so that much is not the appropriate quantifier. Use many with plural count nouns, or say I don't see bikes very often if you mean that you rarely see them.