Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你重复了考官的问题，没有回答自己小时候是否有自行车，因此内容没有回应题目。请先直接回答“Yes, I did”或“No, I didn’t”，再补充一两句具体细节，例如自行车的颜色、骑车地点或和谁一起骑。注意表达“小时候”时应说“when you were a child”。

例: Yes, I did. My parents bought me a small blue bike when I was about seven. I used to ride it around our neighborhood with my friends.

提案: 你只是重复了考官的问题，没有表达自己的看法。请先明确回答“Yes, I do”或“No, I don’t”，再说明自行车在你所在国家受欢迎或不太受欢迎的原因，并用具体场景支持观点，例如通勤、健身或城市交通。

例: Yes, I do. Bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among students and people who want to exercise. In crowded cities, cycling can also be a convenient way to avoid traffic.

× Did you have a bike when you were child?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

单数可数名词“child”前通常需要限定词。这里应在“child”前加不定冠词“a”。建议检查单数可数名词前是否缺少冠词。