Part 1
試験官
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
受験者
Yes.
試験官
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
受験者
Yes, maybe I think bike showering service can cheap and convenient.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
スコア: 45.0提案: 回答直接,但只有一个词,缺少支持细节。可以补充说明你是否经常骑车、在哪里骑,或自行车给你带来的感受;控制在一到两句,并使用自然表达。
例: Yes, I had a small blue bike when I was a child. I often rode it around my neighborhood with my friends.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
スコア: 35.0提案: 先直接回答问题,避免同时使用“maybe”和“I think”造成犹豫;“bike showering service”应改为“bike-sharing services”,“can cheap”应改为“can be cheap”。再补充一个具体原因或使用场景,让回答更完整。
例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in big cities. Bike-sharing services are convenient and affordable, so people often use them for short trips.
× Yes, maybe I think bike showering service can cheap and convenient.
✓ Yes, maybe I think the bike showering service can be cheap and convenient.
情态动词 can 后面需要接动词原形。cheap 和 convenient 是形容词,因此要在它们前面加 be,构成 can be cheap and convenient。
× Yes, maybe I think bike showering service can cheap and convenient.
✓ Yes, maybe I think the bike showering service can be cheap and convenient.
service 是可数名词单数,前面通常需要限定词。这里补上 the,使句子中的单数名词短语结构完整。