Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

練習Part12026-10-18 13:17:27

会話

Part 1

試験官

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

受験者

Yes I has. I had a bike when I was a child.

試験官

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

受験者

Definitely yes, you know in China is a big country is popular with very famous popular route bike and also we have many kinds of wubber bike for people to use to

評価

総合

総合: 5.0流暢さと一貫性: 5.0発音: 5.0文法: 5.0語彙: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

スコア: 55.0

提案: Answer directly and avoid repeating the same idea. Use the past-tense form “had,” not “has.” You could add one specific detail, such as what you used the bike for.

例: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bike when I was a child, and I often rode it around my neighborhood.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

スコア: 35.0

提案: Give a clear answer first, then explain why bikes are popular. Use complete sentences and accurate vocabulary; phrases such as “route bike” and “wubber bike” are unclear. Add a specific example, such as bike lanes or shared bikes, if that is what you mean.

例: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in China. Many people use them for short trips because they are convenient and inexpensive. Shared bikes are also easy to find in many cities.

文法

5: Past tense issue

× Yes I has. I had a bike when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I did. I had a bike when I was a child.

The question uses the past-tense auxiliary did, so the matching short answer is Yes, I did. Has is the wrong verb form here. Use did to answer a past-tense question that begins with Did you.

26: Sentence structure errors

× Definitely yes, you know in China is a big country is popular with very famous popular route bike and also we have many kinds of wubber bike for people to use to

✓ Definitely. You know, China is a big country, and bikes are popular there. We also have many kinds of bikes for people to use.

The original contains incomplete and incorrectly connected clauses. China is needed as the subject of is a big country, and the clauses should be joined clearly. The ending to is unnecessary because use already has its object in this sentence. Organize the answer into complete sentences and use a clear subject for each clause.

重要語彙

Big— Large; Elder; Important; Ambitious
Famous— Well known
Many— Numerous; A great/good deal of
Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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