Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你没有直接回答问题，而是把问题误解成了询问考官或考官的孩子是否有自行车。先抓住关键词“when you were a child”，回答自己小时候有没有自行车；然后可以补充一两个具体细节，例如自行车的颜色、骑车地点或骑车的感受。注意用过去时。

例: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bike when I was about eight, and I used to ride it around my neighborhood with my friends.

提案: 回答有涉及共享单车，但表达不够清楚，也没有充分说明自行车是否普及及原因。“write a sharing bike”用词错误，可以说“ride a shared bike”；“Basically”单独成句显得不完整。建议先明确回答，再用具体原因或例子展开，并说明你喜欢骑车通勤的原因。避免重复使用填充语。

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially shared bikes in big cities. Many people use them for short trips because they are convenient and inexpensive. I sometimes ride one to work when the weather is nice.

× Do you have a bike or your child?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

原问题询问的是“小时候”的经历，因此应使用一般过去时。将 “Do you have” 改为 “Did you have”，并用 “when you were a child” 表达“当你还是孩子时”。