Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 先直接回答问题，再补充一两个具体细节。注意过去时：用“when I was a child”和“had a great time”，不要用“when I were”或“have a great time”。“have a great night with my family”与骑车经历的联系不清楚，可以具体说明你在哪里骑车、和谁一起骑，以及当时的感受。

例: Yes, I did. My father gave me a bike for my birthday when I was about eight. I often rode it around our neighborhood, and I had a lot of fun exploring with my friends.

提案: 回答方向明确，但需要修正语法并让表达更自然：用“the government has introduced policies”，而不是“the governor have released some policy”；用“it is convenient”和“we can ride”。避免重复“transport, transportation”，并说明共享单车或骑车接驳公共交通的具体情况，让理由更有说服力。

例: Yes, I do. Bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities, because bike-sharing schemes make them easy to access. People often ride them around their neighborhoods or cycle to a nearby train station to continue their journey by public transport.

× Uh, yes, my father bought a bike for me as a birthday present when I were a child and I have a great time with the bike and also have a great night with my family.

✓ Uh, yes. My father bought me a bike as a birthday present when I was a child, and I had a great time with it. I also had a great night with my family.

这段话描述的是童年时发生的事情，应使用一般过去时。主语“I”对应的be动词过去式是“was”，不是“were”；“have”也应改为过去式“had”。

× I think bikes are popular in my country because the governor have released some policy of the biking

✓ I think bikes are popular in my country because the governor has released some policy of the biking.

主语“the governor”是第三人称单数，因此现在完成时的助动词应使用“has”，不能用“have”。

× I think bikes are popular in my country because the governor have released some policy of the biking

✓ I think bikes are popular in my country because the governor has released some policies about biking.

“some”通常修饰可数名词复数，因此“some policy”应改为“some policies”。

× ...and we will very convenience to get a bike and we can riding around neighborhood...

✓ ...and it will be very convenient for us to get a bike, and we can ride around the neighborhood...

情态动词“will”后需要接动词原形；这里应使用“be”，构成“will be”。情态动词“can”后也要接动词原形，所以应说“can ride”，不能说“can riding”。

× ...and we will very convenience to get a bike...

✓ ...and it will be very convenient for us to get a bike...

“convenience”是名词，不能直接修饰“be”；此处需要形容词“convenient”，表示“方便的”。

× ...and we can riding around neighborhood...

✓ ...and we can ride around the neighborhood...

这里的“neighborhood”指特定的社区，需要在单数可数名词前加定冠词“the”。