Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答切题，但“I did”和“Yes, I did”重复，内容也过短。保留一个直接回答，再补充一两处具体信息，例如自行车的颜色、骑车的地点或你小时候骑车的感受。

例: Yes, I did. It was a small red bike, and I used to ride it around my neighborhood with my friends.

提案: 观点明确，但后面的理由和表达不够自然。“To bike”可改为“Cycling”，应说“drive a car”；“the bus subway”需要改为“the bus or the subway”。建议补充具体原因，并使用连接词让回答更连贯。

例: I don’t think bikes are very popular in my country, especially in big cities. Cycling can be inconvenient because the roads are often busy and there aren’t many bike lanes. As a result, people usually drive or take the bus or subway.

× Most people prefer to drive car or take the bus subway.

✓ Most people prefer to drive a car or take the bus or subway.

“Car”是可数名词单数，前面通常需要限定词。这里应在“car”前加不定冠词“a”。

× Most people prefer to drive car or take the bus subway.

✓ Most people prefer to drive a car or take the bus or subway.

“The bus subway”把两种交通方式直接并列，缺少表示选择关系的连词。应在“bus”和“subway”之间加“or”，表示“公交车或地铁”。