Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answer directly, then add one or two relevant details, such as how old you were, where you rode, or what you enjoyed about it. This will make your response more developed while staying concise.

例: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was about eight, and I often rode it around my neighborhood with my friends.

提案: State your opinion clearly, then explain who uses bikes and why. Use natural phrasing such as “ride a bike to work” and “an affordable and convenient way to get around.” Avoid repeating “on bike,” and make sure your sentence has a clear ending.

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people ride them to work because they are an affordable and convenient way to get around, especially in busy cities.

× Yes, in my country bikes are very popular because many middle class people use bike for go their job on bike, so very easy drive that's.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because many middle-class people use bikes to get to work. It is very easy to travel by bike.

Bike is used in a general sense to describe a type of transport, so use the plural bikes here. Make the noun agree with the general meaning: many people use bikes.

× Yes, in my country bikes are very popular because many middle class people use bike for go their job on bike, so very easy drive that's.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because many middle-class people use bikes to get to work. It is very easy to travel by bike.

The natural expressions are get to work and by bike. Do not say go their job or on bike. Use to before work when describing a destination, and by to describe the means of transport.

× Yes, in my country bikes are very popular because many middle class people use bike for go their job on bike, so very easy drive that's.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because many middle-class people use bikes to get to work. It is very easy to travel by bike.

The ending so very easy drive that's is not a complete, well-formed clause. Add a subject and a verb, and put the words in a natural order: It is very easy to travel by bike.