Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答直接，但时态错误：谈过去的童年经历，应将“have”改为“had”。可以补充一条具体细节，例如自行车的颜色、用途或你骑车时的感受，让答案更完整。

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was bright red, and I often rode it around my neighbourhood with my friends.

提案: 你的观点很明确，但“I'm widely citable”表达不清楚，无法准确传达原因。可以说香港的道路很拥挤，骑自行车可能不太安全；同时注意在“No”后加逗号，并用一个具体原因支撑观点。

例: No, I don’t think bikes are very popular in Hong Kong. The roads are often crowded, so cycling can feel unsafe. As a result, many people prefer to use public transport.

× Yes, I have a bike when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

句子中的“when I was a child”表示过去的时间，因此主句也应使用一般过去时。把“have”改为“had”。

× No I don't think so because I'm widely citable on the road in Hong Kong

✓ No, I don't think so because the roads in Hong Kong are very crowded.

“citable”意为“可引用的”，不适合描述道路或骑车情况；“widely”也不能自然地修饰这里的意思。可根据上下文改为“the roads in Hong Kong are very crowded”（香港的道路非常拥挤）。