Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

練習Part12026-10-17 23:19:20

会話

Part 1

試験官

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

受験者

Hi, I hope you're doing well. So no, I don't have a bike When you, when I was a child, uh, I didn't remind my child. I don't, I didn't remember anything.

試験官

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

受験者

A year bikes are popular in my country, uh, where, where I live, all children, all, all children have had, uh, bikes. I didn't have one, but all children have.

評価

総合

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

スコア: 30.0

提案: Répondez directement à la question et évitez la formule de salutation, qui n’est pas nécessaire ici. Utilisez le passé pour parler de votre enfance (« I didn’t have ») et formulez clairement votre idée : si vous ne vous en souvenez pas bien, dites-le simplement. Évitez les répétitions et les hésitations afin de rendre votre réponse plus naturelle.

例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. I can’t remember much about that time, but I used to play outside with my friends.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

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提案: Commencez par une réponse claire, par exemple « Yes, they are ». Corrigez l’expression « A year bikes » et évitez de répéter « all children ». Distinguez le présent du passé : vous pouvez dire que beaucoup d’enfants ont un vélo aujourd’hui, puis ajouter que vous n’en aviez pas quand vous étiez enfant. Appuyez votre opinion avec un détail concret.

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among children. Many kids ride them to school or use them to play with their friends. I didn’t have one when I was young, though.

文法

5: Past tense issue

× So no, I don't have a bike when I was a child.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

The question asks about the past, and the phrase when I was a child establishes a past time. Use the simple past negative didn't have instead of the present tense don't have. For past experiences, make sure the verb tense matches the time expression.

重要語彙

Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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