Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答切题，也提到了朋友和自行车的颜色，但时态、动词和句子结构错误较多，导致部分内容难以理解。回忆童年时使用过去时，例如“had”“wanted”“bought”；说明妈妈给你买车时，可说“She bought me a bike”。删去重复表达和填充词，并用“because”“so”连接原因与结果。

例: Yes, I did. I had a bike when I was a child because I wanted to ride with my friends. My mum bought me a green-and-black one, and I really enjoyed using it.

提案: 回答提供了香港居民常搭地铁或公交的理由，但没有清楚表达自行车是否流行。“I feel really nerd”与问题不符，建议直接回答“Yes, they are”或“No, they aren’t”。之后用具体原因补充，例如公共交通方便、道路繁忙，或骑车更适合郊区；注意使用完整句子，并避免句末不完整的“then”。

例: Not particularly, especially in central Hong Kong. Most people use the MTR or buses because public transport is convenient and the roads can be very busy. However, cycling is more popular in the New Territories, where there are more cycle paths.

× Of course I have a bike when I child.

✓ Of course, I had a bike when I was a child.

这段话描述的是童年时期的情况，因此要用过去时：have 应改为 had。另外，when I child 缺少谓语动词，应说 when I was a child。

× Because I won't play with my friend.

✓ Because I wanted to play with my friend.

这里描述的是过去想和朋友一起玩的原因，应使用过去时 wanted。won't 表示将来不会做某事，与童年时期的叙述不一致。

× My friend have a bike.

✓ My friend had a bike.

句子描述过去的情况，所以 have 应改为过去式 had。

× He bite the bike bicycle with to me.

✓ She bought the bicycle for me.

这里是在讲过去发生的事，bite 应改为过去式 bought（buy 的过去式）。另外，原句中的 he 指代 mom，应使用 she；表示“为我买”要说 bought ... for me。

× He bite the bike bicycle with to me.

✓ She bought the bicycle for me.

表示“为某人买某物”时，使用 buy something for someone，不能说 with to me。

× It is a green and black bicycle.

✓ It was a green and black bicycle.

这辆自行车属于过去的童年经历，因此 be 动词应使用过去式 was，而不是现在式 is。

× I feel really nerd.

✓ I feel really nerdy.

feel 后面需要接形容词来描述感受。nerd 是名词，形容词形式是 nerdy。

× People usually use the train or like MTR or a bus.

✓ People usually use the train, the MTR, or a bus.

这里指香港的地铁系统，通常说 the MTR。列举交通方式时，可以用逗号分隔，使表达更清楚。

× People usually use the train or like MTR or a bus, it's very easy to use then.

✓ People usually use the train, the MTR, or a bus, and these are very easy to use.

原句用逗号直接连接两个完整句子，结构不正确。可以在第二个分句前加 and，并用 these 指代前面列出的多种交通工具。