Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 先直接回答问题，再补充购买者、年龄和练习地点等细节。注意避免重复“I had”和“in my home”；过去的经历要使用过去时，例如“my dad bought it for me”和“I practised riding it”。“骑自行车”可说“ride a bike”，“在家里”可说“at home”。

例: Yes, I did. I had a bike when I was about five or six years old. My dad bought it for me, and I practised riding it in the long hallway at home. It was a safe place to learn.

提案: 回答中有过去与现在的对比，内容方向很好。建议将“bikes”作为复数主语，使用“they are popular”；描述过去时用“couldn't afford a car”或“didn't have enough money to buy a car”。避免重复“I think”，并用“Nowadays”或“Also”连接观点。可以补充具体原因，例如健身、休闲或环保。

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. In the past, many people rode them to work because they couldn't afford a car. Nowadays, cycling is also a popular hobby, especially for exercise and leisure. As a result, more people are buying bikes for weekend rides.

× And I remember that it's my dad bought me

✓ And I remember that my dad bought it for me.

“I remember that”后面应接完整的从句。原句中的“it's”使句子结构混乱；可直接说“my dad bought it for me”，其中“it”指前文提到的自行车。

× I just practice how to ride the bicycle

✓ I just practiced how to ride the bicycle.

这句话描述的是童年时发生的事情，因此应使用一般过去时。“practice”的过去式是“practiced”。

× because we have a long hallway in my home

✓ because we had a long hallway in my home.

这里仍在描述过去的居住情况，应使用一般过去时。“have”的过去式是“had”。

× Yes, I think it is very popular

✓ Yes, I think they are very popular.

“they”指代复数名词“bikes”，所以不能用单数代词“it”。相应地，谓语也应使用“are”。

× when people have no money

✓ when people had no money

这里谈的是过去人们没有钱的情况，因此应将一般现在时“have”改为一般过去时“had”。

× to buy the car

✓ to buy a car

这里泛指买一辆汽车，并不是指双方都知道的某一辆特定汽车，因此应使用不定冠词“a”，而不是定冠词“the”。

× to ride the bike for work

✓ to ride a bike to work

这里泛指骑自行车，应使用不定冠词“a”，而不是指某一辆特定的自行车。此外，“to work”是表达“去上班”的常用说法。

× riding bikes are becoming a hobby

✓ Riding bikes is becoming a hobby.

句子的主语是动名词短语“riding bikes”，整体上视为单数，因此谓语应使用“is”，而不是“are”。