Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 先直接回答问题，避免重复“No, I didn’t”。后面可以说明你通常如何上学，并清楚表达学校离家多远。“because a scratch near my home”表达不清，建议改为“because my school was close to my home”；“I spend a ten minutes”可改为“it took me about ten minutes to walk there”。

例: No, I didn’t. I usually walked to school because it was close to my home. It only took me about ten minutes to get there.

提案: 回答方向正确，但有多处词语和语法错误：“people by biker”应改为“people ride bikes”，“flexibility transport”应改为“a flexible means of transport”。避免使用不相关的连接语“By the way”，并用具体理由说明自行车为什么受欢迎，例如通勤方便或适合短途出行。

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people ride them to work because they’re convenient and affordable. They’re also a flexible way to get around, especially for short trips.

× I usually went to school on foot because a scratch near my home I spend a ten minutes.

✓ I usually went to school on foot because a scratch was near my home, and I spent ten minutes.

这段话描述的是小时候的经历，语境为过去时，因此 spend 应改为过去式 spent。原句中 “a scratch near my home” 缺少谓语动词；这里补上 was，使从句结构完整。scratch 的具体含义不明确，因此没有替换这个词。

× I spend a ten minutes.

✓ I spent ten minutes.

ten minutes 是带有数词的复数名词短语，前面不能再加不定冠词 a。应去掉 a。

× My by bikes is the flexibility transport in our da life.

✓ My bikes are the flexibility transport in our da life.

主语 bikes 是复数，因此谓语动词应使用 are，而不能使用单数形式 is。

× My by bikes is the flexibility transport in our da life.

✓ My by bikes is the flexible transport in our da life.

flexibility 是名词，不能直接用来修饰名词 transport。此处需要形容词 flexible，表示“灵活的”。