Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answer directly and use the past tense because the question asks about your childhood. “Have” should be “had,” and “when I child” should be “when I was a child.” Add one relevant detail, such as what you used the bike for.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used to ride it around my neighbourhood with my friends.

提案: Give a clear opinion that answers whether bikes are popular. Then support it with a specific reason or example. Use simple linking words such as “because” or “for example,” and avoid unrelated or unclear phrases.

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities. They’re a convenient way to get around because they’re inexpensive and easy to park.

× Yes, I have a badge when I child.

✓ Yes, I had a badge when I was a child.

The question asks about the past, so use the past-tense verb had instead of have. Use was to describe your state as a child in the past.

× Yes, I have a badge when I child.

✓ Yes, I had a badge when I was a child.

The clause when I child is missing a verb. Add was to form the complete clause when I was a child.

× Yes, I have a badge when I child.

✓ Yes, I had a badge when I was a child.

The singular countable noun child needs the article a. Say a child, not child.