Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答切题，也给出了步行上学的原因。注意在“No, I didn’t”后加标点，并用过去时保持时态一致：“the school was near my home”。可以补充一个具体细节，例如步行需要多长时间，但不必展开太多。

例: No, I didn’t. I usually walked to school because it was only about ten minutes from my home.

提案: 观点明确，也尝试用原因支撑，但有多处语法和搭配问题：“like buy”应改为“like buying”，“buy bike”应改为“buying a bike”；“flexibility on the load”不自然，可以说骑车出行“more convenient”或“offers more flexibility for short trips”。建议补充一个具体场景，并用连接词自然衔接。

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. More and more people cycle to work or school because it’s an affordable and convenient way to get around. They’re especially useful for short trips in busy cities.

× Yes, I think so because more and more people like buy bike to go to work or go to school.

✓ Yes, I think so because more and more people like buying bikes to go to work or go to school.

“like”后面可以接动词-ing形式或不定式。原句中的“like buy”结构不正确，应改为“like buying”或“like to buy”。

× Yes, I think so because more and more people like buy bike to go to work or go to school.

✓ Yes, I think so because more and more people like buying bikes to go to work or go to school.

这里泛指自行车，使用可数名词“bike”时，通常应使用复数形式“bikes”，或使用“a bike”。

× In addition, buy bike is so flexibility on the load.

✓ In addition, buying a bike is very flexible on the load.

动词短语作主语时，通常使用动词-ing形式，因此应将“buy”改为“buying”。

× In addition, buy bike is so flexibility on the load.

✓ In addition, buying a bike is very flexible on the load.

“bike”是可数名词单数，前面需要冠词。这里可以说“a bike”。

× In addition, buy bike is so flexibility on the load.

✓ In addition, buying a bike is very flexible on the load.

“is”后面需要形容词作表语。原句的“flexibility”是名词，应改为形容词“flexible”。