Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời chưa hoàn chỉnh và có lỗi thì. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp bằng “Yes, I did” hoặc “No, I didn’t”, sau đó thêm một chi tiết cụ thể. Dùng quá khứ đơn “had” vì câu hỏi hỏi về thời thơ ấu; tránh kết thúc câu bằng “but” nếu không nêu ý tương phản.

例: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bike when I was about seven, and I used to ride it around my neighborhood.

提案: Bạn đã đưa ra ý kiến và lý do, nhưng câu trả lời khó hiểu do dùng sai từ và cấu trúc. Hãy mở đầu bằng “Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country.” Dùng “bicycles” hoặc “bikes” ở dạng số nhiều, và nói “people ride them” thay vì “they drive them”. Sau đó nêu một lý do cụ thể, chẳng hạn học sinh dùng xe đạp để đi học. Chia ý thành 2–3 câu và dùng từ nối như “because” hoặc “for example”.

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among students. Many children ride them to school because they are affordable and convenient. They’re also useful for short trips around town.

× When I was a child, I have a bike that but.

✓ When I was a child, I had a bike.

The question asks about a past period, and the phrase When I was a child also places the event in the past. Use had, the past tense of have, instead of have. The trailing words that but do not form a complete clause, so remove them unless you can complete the thought.

× Bike is popular in my country yes because the bike is one of the things that cannot like in the shy because they drive them to go to school or go to anywhere they want

✓ Bikes are popular in my country because people ride them to school or go anywhere they want.

Use the plural Bikes to talk about bicycles in general; a singular countable noun such as bike normally needs an article. The phrase one of the things that cannot like in the shy is unclear, so it has been left out rather than guessed at. A clearer answer is to state directly why bikes are popular.

× Bike is popular in my country yes because the bike is one of the things that cannot like in the shy because they drive them to go to school or go to anywhere they want

✓ Bikes are popular in my country because people ride them to school or go anywhere they want.

Do not use to before anywhere. Anywhere already expresses the destination, so say go anywhere they want. For natural phrasing, say ride bikes to school rather than drive them to school.