Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 先直接回答问题，再用一两句补充自行车的外观和骑车经历。注意时态和动词搭配：过去的经历用过去时，骑车应说“ride a bike”，而不是“write a bike”；“have a good time”应使用冠词，“让友谊更亲近”可说“bring us closer”。如果你说的是儿童三轮车，可以明确说“a tricycle”。

例: Yes, I did. I had a bright red tricycle when I was little. I used to ride it with my neighbors in the park, and we always had a great time together.

提案: 观点清楚，也给出了交通拥堵这一理由。注意泛指时用复数“bikes”，并避免重复“in my country”和“bike”；可以补充一个具体场景，例如短途通勤或骑车去附近商店。表达“避开交通拥堵”时可用“avoid traffic jams”。

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in busy cities. Since there are so many cars on the road, cycling is a convenient way to avoid traffic jams, particularly for short trips.

× My bike, it is red, bright and it has four wheels.

✓ My bike was bright red and had four wheels.

这段话讲的是童年时的自行车，应使用过去时。这里的“is”和“has”应分别改为“was”和“had”。

× I always write it with my neighborhood in the park.

✓ I always rode it with my neighborhood in the park.

句子描述的是过去的习惯，应使用过去时。“ride”的过去式是“rode”；“write”不是“ride”的正确时态形式。

× We have good time and this activity get closer our friendship.

✓ We had a good time, and this activity brought us closer as friends.

句子描述童年时的经历，应使用过去时：“have”改为“had”，“get”改为“brought”。

× We have good time and this activity get closer our friendship.

✓ We had a good time, and this activity brought us closer as friends.

“time”在“度过愉快时光”这一表达中需要不定冠词，因此应说“a good time”。

× We have good time and this activity get closer our friendship.

✓ We had a good time, and this activity brought us closer as friends.

“get closer our friendship”的结构不正确。“bring someone closer”表示“使某人关系更亲近”，可以说“brought us closer as friends”。

× Yes, I think bike are popular in my country because bike is a practical way to avoid traffic.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because a bike is a practical way to avoid traffic.

泛指自行车这一类事物时，可以用复数“bikes”；如果使用单数可数名词“bike”，前面需要加冠词“a”。

× In my country there are so many cars, so bike is convenient for us.

✓ In my country there are so many cars, so bikes are convenient for us.

这里泛指自行车，应使用复数“bikes”，而不是单数“bike”。