Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 답변의 의미를 이해하기 어려워 질문에 직접 답하지 못했습니다. 먼저 “Yes, I did” 또는 “No, I didn’t”로 답한 뒤, 자전거의 색이나 언제·어디서 탔는지와 같은 구체적인 정보를 한두 문장 덧붙여 보세요.

例: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bike when I was about seven, and I rode it around my neighborhood with my friends.

提案: 한 단어만으로는 자전거가 인기 있는지에 대한 의견이 전달되지 않습니다. 먼저 “Yes, I do” 또는 “No, I don’t”로 입장을 밝히고, 어떤 사람들이 자전거를 타는지나 그 이유를 구체적인 예와 함께 설명해 보세요.

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among students and people who want to avoid traffic. For example, many people cycle in parks or use bike-sharing services.

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✓ I used to ride a bike when I was a child.

The original phrase does not form a clear, grammatical sentence and does not clearly answer the question. Use a complete clause with a subject and a verb. This correction answers the question using a natural past-tense expression.

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✓ Yes, I think they are popular in my country.

That is a fragment and does not express a complete answer to the question. Use a complete clause with a subject and a verb; this response also directly answers whether bikes are popular.