Part 1
試験官
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
受験者
No, I didn't have one.
試験官
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
受験者
No, I didn't think bikes are popular in my country because my country there are so many persons and everyone has car, you understand?
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
スコア: 78.0提案: 回答直接且语法正确,但内容略短。可以补充一个具体原因或相关细节,例如小时候更常用什么交通工具;控制在一到两句即可。
例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My parents usually drove me to school, so I never really needed one.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
スコア: 42.0提案: 先直接回答问题,并使用一般现在时表达当前看法(“I don’t think…”)。注意语法和搭配:“there are”后可用“a lot of people”,“everyone has a car”;不要说“you understand?”,可用具体例子或对比来补充原因。
例: I don’t think bikes are very popular in my country. There are a lot of people, and many of them prefer to drive because cars are more convenient for commuting.
× No, I didn't think bikes are popular in my country because my country there are so many persons and everyone has car, you understand?
✓ No, I don't think bikes are popular in my country because there are so many people in my country and everyone has a car, you understand?
问题类型:现在时态错误。这里回答的是对自行车在本国是否受欢迎的当前看法,因此应使用一般现在时“don't think”,而不是表示过去的“didn't think”。回答当前观点时,要注意与问题中的一般现在时保持一致。
× No, I didn't think bikes are popular in my country because my country there are so many persons and everyone has car, you understand?
✓ No, I don't think bikes are popular in my country because there are so many people in my country and everyone has a car, you understand?
问题类型:There be句型错误。“There are”应放在句首引出“存在很多人”,地点短语“in my country”放在其后。原句“my country there are”语序不正确。可以使用“There are + 名词 + 地点”结构,例如“There are many people in my country”。
× No, I didn't think bikes are popular in my country because my country there are so many persons and everyone has car, you understand?
✓ No, I don't think bikes are popular in my country because there are so many people in my country and everyone has a car, you understand?
问题类型:冠词错误。“car”是可数名词单数,前面通常需要冠词;这里应说“has a car”。说英语时,遇到单数可数名词时,记得检查前面是否需要“a”或“the”。