Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answer the question directly instead of repeating it. Use the past tense and add one specific detail, such as what the bike looked like or where you rode it. Make sure your answer is a complete, clear sentence.

例: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bike when I was about eight, and I used to ride it around my neighborhood with my friends.

提案: Give a clear opinion first, then support it with a reason or example. Avoid repeated fillers and self-corrections such as “everyone, not everyone.” Use “bicycles” for pedal bikes and distinguish them from motorcycles. You could also explain why people use them, such as for exercise or short trips.

例: Yes, bicycles are fairly popular in my country, especially for exercise and short trips. I don’t own one myself, though; I used to have a motorcycle, which is more convenient for getting around.

× I told the.

✓ The sentence is incomplete; complete it with the intended object or information.

The sentence ends with the, a determiner that must be followed by a noun. The intended meaning is unclear, so add the missing noun or restate your answer as a complete sentence.

× I don't have a bike and but I, I had a motorcycle.

✓ I don't have a bike, but I had a motorcycle.

And and but should not be used together here. Use but to show the contrast between not having a bike and having had a motorcycle. Remove the repeated I as a speech disfluency.