Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 先直接回答问题，并使用过去时：例如用“I didn’t have a bike”。你的原因表达不够清楚，“control the mic”可能是想说“control the bike”；请确认并准确表达。避免重复和停顿，补充一个具体细节即可，例如说明你为什么害怕骑车。

例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because I was afraid I might lose control of it. I sometimes had trouble riding, so I preferred to walk.

提案: 回答开头要清晰，并明确说明你认为自行车是否受欢迎。“out of date”与后面的原因衔接不自然；请使用准确的词语，例如“motorcycles”或“electric vehicles”，并用 because 解释原因。句子需要完整，最好补充具体比较或例子。

例: No, I don’t think traditional bicycles are as popular as they used to be. In many cities, people prefer motorcycles or electric vehicles because they are faster and more convenient for longer journeys.

× I don't have a bike when I am child because I, uh, always. I can't control the mic and I always get into trouble so I I'm scared.

✓ I didn't have a bike when I was a child because I couldn't control it and always got into trouble, so I was scared.

这段话是在回答“小时候有没有自行车”，描述的是过去的情况，因此要使用过去时：用“didn't have”代替“don't have”，用“was”代替“am”，并用“couldn't”“got”和“was”描述当时的能力、经历和感受。回答过去的问题时，要保持相关动词的时态一致。

× I don't have a bike when I am child because I, uh, always. I can't control the mic and I always get into trouble so I I'm scared.

✓ I didn't have a bike when I was a child because I couldn't control it and always got into trouble, so I was scared.

“child”是可数名词单数，前面需要冠词。这里应说“a child”，不能说“was child”。可以记住：单数可数名词通常不能单独出现，需要搭配冠词或其他限定词。

× No uh, I think it is out of date because the eBay motorcycle. Or vehicle is more and more popular and.

✓ No, I think bikes are out of date because motorcycles or other vehicles are becoming more and more popular.

“because”后面需要接完整的原因从句，但原句中的“the eBay motorcycle”是未完成的名词短语；“Or vehicle...”也没有和前面的内容组成结构完整的句子。可以把相关名词合并，并使用“because + 主语 + 谓语”表达完整原因。