Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答切题，也提供了年龄、礼物和颜色等具体细节。注意语法：表达过去喜欢骑车应说“I was really into cycling”；“yellow color”可简化为“yellow”，而“so that's why”后缺少结果，建议删除或补全。可用连接词把生日礼物和喜欢黄色的原因自然衔接起来。

例: Yes, I was really into cycling as a child. When I was seven, my mum gave me a yellow bike for my birthday. Yellow has always been my lucky colour, so it quickly became my favourite thing to ride.

提案: 开头直接回答了问题，但后面的表达有多处用词和语法错误：“write it back”应为“ride bikes”，“a very popular way”需要冠词；“a good way for us to keep”意思不完整，可说“a good way to keep fit”。建议说明人们骑车通勤或锻炼，并用“because”或“as well as”连接理由。

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people ride them to work or school, especially for short journeys. Cycling is convenient and affordable, and it’s also a good way to keep fit.

× Yes, I really into it.

✓ Yes, I was really into it.

原句缺少系动词 be，因此句子不完整。这里的“into”表示“对……感兴趣”，需要与 be 动词连用。由于说的是童年时期的情况，应使用过去式“was”。

× So it's very popular way to ask for us to commute and also as a good way for us to keep.

✓ So it's a very popular way for us to commute and also a good way for us to keep fit.

可数名词单数“way”前需要冠词，因此应在“very popular way”前加不定冠词“a”。

× So it's very popular way to ask for us to commute and also as a good way for us to keep.

✓ So it's a very popular way for us to commute and also a good way for us to keep fit.

原句中“and also as a good way”与前面的“it's ... way”结构不平行，应改为“and also a good way”。此外，“keep”在这里需要补充说明保持什么状态；表达“保持健康”时可以说“keep fit”。